lørdag den 23. oktober 2010

Rettelser af engelsk stil: Prejudice.

But it was so hard saying goodbye to my friends and family, all the people I loved and always had known, I had to say goodbye too and I had no idea when I got to see them again.
Rettet: It was so hard saying goodbye to my friends and family, all the people I loved and always had known, I had to say goodbye too and I had no idea when I got to see them again.

We all agreed that it was probably best to move me to the school that was in Ishøj, where there are a lot more foreigners.
Rettet: We all agreed that it probably was the best to move me to a school in Ishøj, where there were a lot more foreigners.

But I have learnt to ignore it.
Rettet: I have learnt to ignore it.

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